Changes To My Magazine

After i uploaded the first draft of my magazine my teacher pointed out some things what needed to be changed theys wore small things that needed to be done to make the magazine as real as i posible, one of the things i added was the price on the cover page this needed to be done so the reader knows how much the magazine is for. allso the DPS did not have diffrent types of photos so have to change the film strim so they wore some close ups as well as long shots and medium close ups.